Monday, March 17, 2014

Monday, March 17 semicolons

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Chicago turns its river green on St. Paddy's Day


The week ahead. New plans as of last Wednesday's snow day and the sparse attendance on Friday.
Today: semicolon activity sheet. Due at the end of class.  Test on Thursday on this material. (class handout / copy below)
Tuesday and Wednesday. In class Maggie, Girl of the Streets essay. Hand written, as we cannot get in the library lab. 
Everyone has already chosen his or her essay. If you were here on Friday, I gave you detailed instructions. Make sure you get one today and review / prepare for the next two days. (See copy below) 
Thursday, vocabulary test from Maggie list 2 (we were to have it originally today) AND the semicolon assessment.  Last grades for this marking period.

Maggie, Girl of the Streets by Stephen Crane     essay directions
At this point, everyone should have committed to one of the following four topics.
1.       What role does religion play in Maggie, Girl of the Streets?
2.       Why is Maggie unable to survive in the environment in which she was raised?
3.       To what extent is Maggie, Girl of the Streets a realist novel?
4.       How do sociological and economic circumstances influence Maggie and Jimmy?
General information:
1.       MLA heading
2.       Minimum 500 words (approximately 3 handwritten pages of medium-sized script.
3.       Supporting text. Remember that you make a statement, prove it and then offer of an analysis, which is saying why this particular piece of information is significant in terms of contributing to your original thesis statement.
4.       You must have at an introduction with a clearly stated thesis / controlling idea.
5.       You must have a minimum of three body paragraphs, each with textual evidence.
6.       Your conclusion should not be a restatement of the introduction, but an insightful observation or extension of the controlling idea. Possible scenarios include historical, sociological, psychological connections.
7.       Due at the end of class on Wednesday.
Advice for individual topics.
1.       Religion: look at the specific characters; note hypocrisy
                 Look at religion of the gentility and the mission church

2.       Survival in the environment: lots of concrete information; focus on imagery; think about the people, places and society as a whole.  What do you know of Maggie’s character and how can you demonstrate this?

3.       Maggie as a realist novel:  Consider use vernacular language, who  these characters are, control of one’s destiny, complex ethics


4.       Sociological and economic circumstances:  these ties into the immigration movement. Make connections to Riis’ How the Other Half Lives.


    Name _________________________________-
When do I use a semicolon?
Use a SEMICOLON
1. Between independent clauses not joined by coordinating conjunctions
(for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so)
   
Example
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2. Between independent clauses joined by a conjunctive adverb  

           Example 
   
http://www.towson.edu/ows/punctrev2.jpg
   

   
   
3. Between items in a series containing internal punctuation
   
Example
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Semicolon practice
For each of the following rewrite the sentence, incorporating semicolons where needed. After each, write the number of the rule you followed.

1.      The score was tied the game went into overtime.

___________________________________________________________________________________
      1a Rule # ________________________

2.       Professor Brown has left the laboratory, however, you may still be able to reach her through email.
___________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________

       2a. Rule # _______________

3.      We didn't attend the play, besides, we had heard that all the good seats were taken.

________________________________________________________________________

      3a Rule #__________________

4.      We stayed in Baltimore, Maryland, Omaha, Nebraska, and Philadelphia, Pennsylvania.

___________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________

      4a. Rule #_____________________

5.      The three performers included Jasper, a trained squirrel, Belzar, a tightrope walker, and Petunia, a magician. 

__________________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________________

      5a. Rule #________________
       
6.      Read the article out loud, then answer all ten questions on the quiz.

__________________________________________________________________________________________

      6a. Rule # ___________________

    


7.      Martin had paid his dues; therefore, we allowed him to vote in the election.

__________________________________________________________________________________________

        7a Rule # ________________________

8.      The World Series had begun, however, we were still stuck in traffic.
        
_________________________________________________________________________________________

     8a. Rule #_____________________

9.      The World Series had begun, however, we were still stuck in traffic.

_____________________________________________________________________

  9a. Rule # _________________

10.                 Martin Luther King did not intend to become a preacher, originally he wanted to be a lawyer.

__________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________

      10 a. Rule # ___________________



11.                 The parole hearing was attended by James Thomas, who was a federal prosecutor, Irene Milton, who supervised the state prison system, and Jeremy Ingram, a former legal aide for the city.

 _________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________

       11a. ________________

12.                 Many parents are in favor of school uniforms, they feel that the uniforms develop a sense of community among students.

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

    12 a Rule # ____________________


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